Critique -- Discussions http://www.scivee.tv/node/28826/talks/2186 Overall this presentation is important be cause it shows how important it is to be compliant if you are an asthma sufferer. There are many adverse outcomes of non-compliance which become clear by following a day in the life of a non-compliant person. This topic is also important because it targets teens, who have the least information and are the most likely to be non-compliant. Major points that should be addressed more is how this is geared towards teenagers. Although the video is very informational it seems like it could be a day in the life of any asthma sufferer, not exclusively a teenager. Minor points: maybe they could include helpful tips on how to stay compliant. We believe this is going to be a very engaging video and we can't wait to see the final product! Lara Lipskey, Pam Saarikoski, and DooHyang Kwon. "Don't let "uh oh" become "oh no". Critique http://www.scivee.tv/node/28826/talks/2186#m2186 Overall this presentation is important be cause it shows how important it is to be compliant if you are an asthma sufferer. There are many adverse outcomes of non-compliance which become clear by following a day in the life of a non-compliant person. This topic is also important because it targets teens, who have the least information and are the most likely to be non-compliant. Major points that should be addressed more is how this is geared towards teenagers. Although the video is very informational it seems like it could be a day in the life of any asthma sufferer, not exclusively a teenager. Minor points: maybe they could include helpful tips on how to stay compliant. We believe this is going to be a very engaging video and we can't wait to see the final product! Lara Lipskey, Pam Saarikoski, and DooHyang Kwon. "Don't let "uh oh" become "oh no". Apr 25, 2011 http://www.scivee.tv/node/28826/talks/2186#m2186