Overall this presentation is important be cause it shows how important it is to be compliant if you are an asthma sufferer. There are many adverse outcomes of non-compliance which become clear by following a day in the life of a non-compliant person. This topic is also important because it targets teens, who have the least information and are the most likely to be non-compliant.
Major points that should be addressed more is how this is geared towards teenagers. Although the video is very informational it seems like it could be a day in the life of any asthma sufferer, not exclusively a teenager.
Minor points: maybe they could include helpful tips on how to stay compliant.
We believe this is going to be a very engaging video and we can't wait to see the final product!
Lara Lipskey, Pam Saarikoski, and DooHyang Kwon. "Don't let "uh oh" become "oh no".