Storyboard Critique: Sleep – Not Just for the Weak (Group 11)

Critiqued by Group 10

(Jennie Yanyan Ma, Katie Moy, Yasuno Sato)

Overall Value:

Good choice of topic: affects a large portion of population.

Many people with sleep problems or sleep-related disorders

Major Points:


Where to go for more information

Stress talking to a professional

Significance of the topic: how many people affected?

Tailor to target audience: who’s your audience? (college educated or 8th grade level?)

modify complexity of background info (how much detail is appropriate?)

Minor Points:

Wordy in many slides: hard to read & loses audience interest

split slides (more slides w/ less info per slide)

Like the bar at bottom: easy to navigate

Modify background: a bit distracting or hard to read

Catchy title! ;)