Storyboard Critique: Sleep – Not Just for the Weak (Group 11)
Critiqued by Group 10
(Jennie Yanyan Ma, Katie Moy, Yasuno Sato)
Good choice of topic: affects a large portion of population.
Many people with sleep problems or sleep-related disorders
Where to go for more information
Stress talking to a professional
Significance of the topic: how many people affected?
Tailor to target audience: who’s your audience? (college educated or 8th grade level?)
modify complexity of background info (how much detail is appropriate?)
Wordy in many slides: hard to read & loses audience interest
split slides (more slides w/ less info per slide)
Like the bar at bottom: easy to navigate
Modify background: a bit distracting or hard to read
Catchy title! ;)